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April 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just spent almost 3 hours reading this from start to finish and I have to say ... What a Wonderful story! You write Zuko and Katara very well. And that bit with Katara and Haru? Perfectly done!
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I am TOTALLY hooked on this story!! please please please PLEASE update soon!!!! I was so sad to see there was no chapter 26 yet. thanks!
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March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great job
please update soon
please update soon
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February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just wanna say that you are the best writer ever! Probubly better than J.K Rowling you have such a gift that not many people have. The way you interact the characters and thier emotions and feelings can really make you feel the same way the reader does:) BTW I am Rachel from DA! and as you know I have been following your work since 05. Please update soon I really can't wait to read more
Love,
Rachel<3
Love,
Rachel<3
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February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice job with the whole story I am loving it so far
Update soon please!
Update soon please!
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February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i think this story is really great! i love the mix of plot lines
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February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really really good please do update again soon!!
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February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not very good at constructive criticism when the piece is good! the only thing i can think is a couple spelling errors!
i really enjoy your stories and can say with all honesty, i am hopelessly addicted! you're a great writer and i hope you continue with your great stories. i've really enjoyed all of Slow Heat. i really enjoy the character interaction you've developed in addition to the continuing story line. keep it up!
i really enjoy your stories and can say with all honesty, i am hopelessly addicted! you're a great writer and i hope you continue with your great stories. i've really enjoyed all of Slow Heat. i really enjoy the character interaction you've developed in addition to the continuing story line. keep it up!
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February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Awesome dialog with Sokka and Chitshag. Nearly fell off my chair and caused my friend to think I was insane until I explained.
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
more lemon please :]
but I love how the story is coming along
update soon ^_^
but I love how the story is coming along
update soon ^_^