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I HATE YOU AANG!! LEAVE THEM ALONE!!! lmao aw man...so smutty...so...beautiful lol...I wish this happened in the real show, well obviously the smut wouldnt...it's Nick lol but still :'( aw man.... I didn't know this story existed, my friend told me about kiss of Fire and I am soooo loving that and I decided to check out what else you have and stumbled upon this.... muy bueno i must say... my only problem is that whoever checks ur stories misses out on sum typos...i mean they're simple little errors like out instead our and stuff like that but I mean if u have ppl checking ur stories for that then.... no offense but theyre slacking lol idk, typos kind of annoy me, but ur stories are so good that i can ignore them with ease :-D PLZ KEEP UPDATING BEFORE I DIE WAITING!!! AAAAAAAAAAHHHHH for both stories :-D of course

NNNNIIIICCEEEE! Yummy I loved this very smexy hawt chapter. Thank you for sending me off to the anime fest in LA this weekend with such yummy images. I'm luving every second of this story!

I loved the latest chapter.
Keep it up. I'm looking forward to your updates.

oh, what a great chapter! lovin' the smexy ;) i really enjoyed the intimacy you depicted also, i'm really looking forward to the next chapter... and wondering if strawberries will pop up in kiss of fire, hmmm? ;)
the only critical things i can mention in the story is one spelling mistakes and a couple 'an's instead of 'a's... other than that, good stuff! keep 'em coming lady!

Such a wonderful chapter!

Hey, I'm really enjoying this story so far. But do you really have to torture Aang for so long? Just have Katara tell him he doesn't want him already. He'll get over it. If she's with Zuko then there shouldn't be any reason for her to hold back an answer like in the show. And it would probably be in character to expect him to get very angry at both Zuko and Katara, and maybe attack Zuko.

Maybe that could be the reason why Aang leaves during the finale in this version?

Just a suggestion.

Hello!
I have read most of your Zutara fanfica and I have to say that I am hooked! Capture of the Maiden is definitely one of my all time favorites now...I love how you incorporated the Dragon and Siren themes into the story...it fits them perfectly. The Hades/Persephone story line is also a perfect fit. I have to say though, I am not behind any Aang and Katara AT ALL! LMAO They are so much alike and he is too young minded to deal with the trials of being a teenager that a match like that just can't work for me. :)
Anyway, I also love Slow Heat and anxiously await for the next installment, and I am glad you put this link on fanfiction...now I can find good clean smut (which I am really good at writing!)
And just as a shameless plug...I haven't written a fanfic for Avatar as of yet, and of course it will be a Zutara, but I do have a few ideas...I have to first finish my other stories which I have written in my first love, VOLTRON. You can check me out on fanfiction...would love any more reviews...end of shameless plug! LMAO
Keep up the good work and I look forward to hearing from you...and waiting for the next chapter.

Awww so sweet and warm. I agree with the EIP episode was pure fan service but they didn't go far enough, they should have had actor Zuko kiss actress Katara. That would have made my day.

'I didn't think anyone would ever.... care for me as a man.' Lemme tell you this line totally made me warm and gooey, I adore this line.

Thank you so much for updating so quickly! New chapters always bring a smile to my face:)

FANTASTIC!

very sweet chapter
thank you for updating so quickly
and thank you for being so dedicated and detailed to this story
im looking forward to the rest of the chapters