rate_review Reviews

Just wanted to drop you a line and say that this story is great so far! I've spent the last couple days reading it, and was so upset to see that it stopped there! Noooo! Please update soon! But anyway, I love the banter that you produce between Zuko and Katara, and the way that you write Aang. You have him dead on, in my mind he's just as whiny and immature. One of my favorite lines that still makes me chuckle from a few chapters back was when Aang caught Zuko kissing Katara. Something like : "Zuko was kissing her! What else? Hugs? Definitely! What else? Whatever boyfriends and girlfriends do.." I know that's not quite it, but it cracked me up. Anyway, keep up the great work!

omg! evil woman! such a cliff hanger. great chapter though, i loved it ;)
please more soon! you have to finish is... both of them!

ZOMG!!!!

AAAAAAHHHHHHHH! Oh dude I'm mollifing myself right now with the promise that 'Kiss of Fire' is but just the same I'm on pins and needles. I really should be studing for my final tommorrow but I just can't help reading your story. I really do enjoy all of your work.

Wow, this is such an awesome story!!! I love how you've been dedicated enough to see our beloved couple through the entire season!

It makes me really sad that Slow Heat is destined to have such a sad ending, after they've gone through so much (it seems like I've seen nothing but bittersweetness from the fandom lately).

Or are you planning on making this like the Cold Fire arc, and allowing Kiss of Fire to be an "alternate ending"?

Argh! I wanna know, but that would spoil everything, wouldn't it?

Thanks for a great story (for all of them), and doing what Bryke couldn't (because we all know Nickelodeon would've burst into sexy, sexy flames if it had happened in canon).

I am so glad to have stumbled upon this story. (I am glad I am not the only one displeased with the way the third season went, so it was good to read your take on the series.) It took me a while to catch up, but it was a wonderful experience throughout. You are a gifted writer, and you can bet I will be reading your other stories as well. I will keep watch for updates to this, as well. =)

really great chapter
i loved the girl talk between katara and jun super funny
and iroh being a zutara shipper takes the cake everytime

I really like this story. it feels more real than the TV show!

A thoroughly enjoyable chapter! Jun, you rock! Loved the girls bath thing. :D

His heart burns for you.... so frigging cute. I love how you weave the humor and little tid bits through out the story. I'm always so happy every time I see you update or come out with a new story. You are a great author and I really enjoy reading your work.