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immm BACK and just wanted to amend you on your work again im still waiting for how your gonna end it and what road you'll take but im still glued to it

wait.....she's actually dead!?!?!?!?!

Waaaaa!! I know this is not the true end but it still kills me to read. I adore what you did with Azula. You gave her the respect of the truly great villianess she was. I think of Azula like Melficent from Sleeping Beauty, she didn't go down like a punk either. I don't think the show did her the justice it should have, a great villian is needed for a great hero, and Azula was great, better than her old man.

I love what you did with Sokka and the Wang Fire mention was always loved. Nice use of Toph as well and of the others. I enjoyed the differences in the burials of the cultures and I liked the mentions of the decor (like the Agni statue) and of the clothes.

I loved this story so much, I always liked seeing a new chapter added but am bittersweet about the ending. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful writing with us, I'm so glad that people like you are in this world.

So sad D:

Well written but very sad. I eagerly await the alternate ending lol

Whyyyyyyyyy

Oh noes! What happens next? D:

To be perfectly honest: this is my first time reading an Avitar fanfic--and now I have a sneaking suspicion that I will be extremely picky if/when I go look for more lol. I love the fact that you have an original plotline *gaspies* that blends with the one already in place--even with tweaks here and there =3

Then again, if you change from the original story too much--I'm not going to notice because I can't get my hands on any episodes beyond Book 1 D,=

I'm not sure what I want you to update more--this fanfic or Darkness Becomes Her xD;;

Keep up the good work <3

OH NO!!!!!
what happened please you can't just cut me off like that
i hate cliffhangers

great chapter!!!

After i found this story on FF, I couldn't pull myself away, a bit disappointed that it was only 19 chapters long at first.
But when I came to chapter 15, with the mention if a different site with this story, I let curiousity take control.
Am I glad I did.

This is one of the best written, most thought out stories I've read on any fanfiction site. I couldnt helpp but re-read the first 15 chapters and continue on to the most recent one.
But Now I have to beg that you update soon. Cliffhangers and I, we aren't on friendly terms.

Any-who, amazing job and I'll be waiting for the next chapters.

this was a great chapter
I just wish you focused more on emotions in this chapter when Zuko got shot with lightning and Katara had to heal him.

I'm so sad... that part of the story was... I don't know how to describe it. I know it was necesary but I really hope the other endind for Slow heat.

Even them, I think that this is your best story. This chapther was amazing (even with the sad parts). Already, I'm waiting the next part.