rate_review Reviews

One key aspect that I like about your writing style is that it’s never monotonous, even after reading this for what feels like my seventh time, I always feel a strong sense of nostalgia. So in short reading a new chapter of your story feels like opening a bottle of champagne. That’s the highest complement that I can pay anyone.

Wow, I can't believe how great a writer you are! I'm surprised to see Zuko being the submissive one when it comes to sex--I would've figured that, with his upbringing, he'd be more willing to take control.

Also, your character dialogues are fantastic. I almost feel like I'm reading something that was copied straight out of an Avatar episode--albeit a late-night one :P If you ever get bored with writing 'dirty' fanfiction (though I've yet to see anything remotely 'dirty' anywhere in this story--your sex scenes are written beautifully!), you should try writing a regular Tokka fanfic :)

Thank you for writing this story, and please, update soon!

I am really loving this. The Sokka/Toph relationship that carried over from the first story is beautifully done, and I can't wait for the Aang/Katara stuff that the description promises. The story is also intruiging. I just can't wait to find out what their evil plan is. You must write more! I'm afraid I have to insist. More chapters are required.

Could you please update this? I'm dying to know what happens next!

Now this is something to look forward to in the future.

You Must Write More!!!

I mean come one, you've stopped it right when it was beginning to get really interesting! And not just from all the sex!

I know the show isn't on right now, and it frustrates me I know, but please write more, continue on! This is a fiction (minus the adult content) that would be worthy of Nickelodeon's Standards! The entire story is compelling, original, and creative, and I hope you continue it soon.

Someone who writes an Avatar smut fic and writes it well? Praise the heavens! I can't wait to see what happens to Aang and Katara. Please update soon!

Again, I'm sorry to ask, being that I take some pride in that I'm picky, but...

FOR THE LOVE OF GODDESS AND GOD, PLEASE WRITE A CONCLUSION!!! I KNOW YOU NEED INSPIRATION, BUT JUST WATCH OLD EPISODES!!! I CAN'T STAND NOT KNOWING WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! I'M YOUR LOYAL FANBOY! PLEASE! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!

You are one of the most talented writers on this site, but you really need to come back to this story because it's only a couple of chapters away from being an absolute (but very dirty) fanfiction classic