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September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well that was pretty awesome, at last u posted a boondocks fic. I ust wishd that it was a little bit deeper w/ emotional development an plot and all that noval shit. Got a bit OOC when Riley was all like " I love you, Sara Dubois. "LOL But if you wer going for riley having a soft side than that woks too. Just don't have him talking w/ a british accent and all proper and s&%t. But if this fic is going to be purely for the perv's, like myself, than details never hurt. Neither is trying new stuff and positions. Either way, I encourage you to write on.