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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow-wee! That was another wonderful chapter! I can't wait til you update soon! I love the way you write the characters, it's so...In-Character! Everyone!
Update soon, please! I can't wait!
Update soon, please! I can't wait!
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love you more than air.
I like air a whole lot.
Please continue. ClayxJack is like......beavers made of gold.
You win the internet.
I like air a whole lot.
Please continue. ClayxJack is like......beavers made of gold.
You win the internet.
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its getting good ^_^ update soon
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I never get around to reviewing stories, but yours is amazing! I absolutely love ClayxJack and you have a special ability to weave words into an awesome story. Please update Neutral ground as soon as possible. Thanks for the great story, WhiteMagic222
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh!! nice story nice story ^ _ ^
i love where this is going and you made jack sound so adorably...enticing lol!
continue to update this yes yes!!
i love where this is going and you made jack sound so adorably...enticing lol!
continue to update this yes yes!!
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow this is a really good beginning. I'd love to read more. Update soon? I'll be checkin!
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That Clay and Jack moment was too cute! And I'm liking the way you're portraying this! There's a plot! Love affairs! Angst! Everything needed in a good story! Update soon!
-Niiro
-Niiro
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good first chapter. it's 'bout time clay got some lovin' :D
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was just browsing through the Xiaolin Showdown stories, saw yours and decided to read it. I'm more of a Chase/Jack or Raimundo/Jack person myself, but I'm glad I read this. I really liked it and hope you continue. ...I'll stop rambling now. >.>;
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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please update soon.