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PLEASE finish this. I'm begging you.

This is really interesting. You must have done some pre-writing before you wrote any of this right? It's very well written. I can't wait to see what happens next. I have a feeling something is going to happen between Kyle and Stan; you know what I mean! But I'm probably wrong. I hope you update this soon! This is a fantastic story!

Simply exquisite...

It's...intruiging...to say the least...

Fluffy...and yet...full of anguish...

Nice...


-Valtiel
(Silent Hill)

Just wandering if there was more

Aww This has been a pleasure to read so far and the last chapter was super cute! Well done, this is very well written.

I just read this on fanfiction.net.
why isn't it updated like it is on ff. love it by the way. very well written even if the charachters are a big OOC

This was a great read. I hope you add more. :D You've managed to write something that very few authors in this fandom are SUCCESSFUL at: SP high school fic with the boys -in character-, more or less. Eric's a manipulative bastard, Kyle's intelligent and rational despite awful situations, and Stan... Stan especially, you've done a great job with. He -has- inherited some of his dad's illogical anger, and he does take things at face value, but no matter what, he cares about his friends more than anything. WONDERFUL. I loved all the allusions to tiny details from various episodes (Okama Gamesphere2, among others), too.

So... Yeah. XD Nice work!

NICE.

AAAAAAWWWW!! Sweet chapter!! ^^

aww....the ending of ch3 was so sweet. This as turned out to be a rather interesting story, please update again soon!