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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE START WRITING MORE! I'm dying without it!

This is an amazing and beautiful story. And that is to say the least. I stayed up all night reading this because the story flows and captures the reader to the point where they can't stop reading. I dearly hope that you decided to continue this story. It is one of my favorite I have ever read.

The scene whenZuko meets Kaya is so beautifully developed. Wonderful!

I am so excited to read your next chapter!! Please post soon!!

This is great!!! Fantastically written!! But I have a question, how old are Iroh and Kaya at the end of the last chapter???

WOAH WOAH WOAH WOAH WOAH! Hold up..... To me it sounded like Iroh has Ozai's spirit.... THAT SUCKS!!!! Good story by the way...if only you would update :'( It's been what? 5 months? :'( Come on lady pppppppppplllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!! Believe it or not people still read your story (I started reading this a month ago :D ) plz update I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!

forgive me i dont even know if u are still here on this site by I just come across your fics and I reviewed "prisoner of war" but as i started to read bitter alliance I read the first and second chapters and half way through the second I burst into tears, I already got the terror and fear and lonliness and broken pieces that these two people are and poor sokka, i was a bumbling mess. This is fucking brilliant I have read alot of fics for a very long time and very few ppl have gotten such a emotion crash out of me as u did, and its only 2 chapters I brace myself for the rest and implore you and beg you to continue these wonderful fics you have left behind. my email is scarlet_witch_extreme@hotmail.com.

Respect
Scarlet

And this is another wonderful story! I do hope you finish this one as well as Price of Peace. They are both really excellent. Thank you for sharing what you have so far, and I hope you will return to complete these.... :)

Please update I miss this story

I love this story! I hope your next installment comes soon!