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Wow, I love it, especially the bit with Paulina being a floosy. Great job with keeping the characters um ... in character, and good plot!!! I look forward to other pieces ^-^

OMFG!!!!!! THIS IS AWSOME!! This is a great fic even with the lack of R-rated smut! It's time that Paulina finally gets what's coming to her!! ROCK ON!!!

that was an alright story but u did have a few spelling mistakes. . .

Tis is a really fantastic story I love it, keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more of your future stories. I can't wait to read more of this story if you are going to write some more which I think you should. :^)

cool, you did a good job, not too much detailing and not to little- I look forward to seeing more of your work.

This story was so cute. It almost made me cry at the sheer beauty of it. Yes, I do find Danny and Sam sex scenes beautiful. You did it very nicely and I applaud your story.

I loved it! There arn't that many S/D fics as you would think. I hope you continue to write more on this pair or Vlad and Sam. In your future writing make sure you check your spelling and grammer. Your spelling is a big issue. I loved the fic, but you had plenty of mistakes. I hope to see more of your work. Thanks.

Nice story, I really liked it. I hope you continue with more Danny Phantom stories.

Ok~, this story has a good plot and is really good, but you need a litte work on your word usage.
For instance,
Sense = sight smell and hearing ect. Since is the word you are looking for.
Site = a place of work or location, Sight is the word you needed
Hay = for horses.... literally. Hey is the greeting.
Fallow = ? but i think you mean follow.
Beet= a vegatable, Beat
Anyway, this is not a flame but I think your writing will become much better if you use the right words.
Also you tend to over word things a bit simplify things just a little it will help your reader and yourself.
Anyway, great story i hope you continue writing