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Hah... I was reading this, thinking to myself 'hmm, this writing style is awfully familiar'... then I followed the links to your HP Sev/Hermione fics :). Been a fan of yours for a long time, glad to see you writing in this fandom :). This story is really fantastic - one of the best of this pairing I've read in a long time. Bravo...

Wow! Awesome! I am just awestruck by your characterizations and voices. I LOVE THIS!!!

I am sorry your hand hurts however... I do hope you start enjoying a pain-free exisitence soon... Thanks for writing this for us though, even through all the odds!

Aloha,
Chris

:D Toph/Sokka is cute...loved their interaction. I also enjoyed Katara's graceful enterence XD very dignified.
Hope your hand feels better soon!

nice 2 know katara got there safely. im starting 2 think that sokka n toph do make a cute couple.

Wow, this story is just, WOW! I mean, at first it started off a little iffy but as it went on I couldn't stop reading it. I must, good work to both you and Moncapitan! I also hope that your recovery is going well after your surgery. I don't know much about what was wrong with your hand but I hope you have regained full mobility. Back to your story, it has passion, intrigue, adventure and suspense that keeps me comming back for more. My favourite moments so far were when Zuko and Katara made love for the first time, when she kissed his scar, and when she whispered she loved him. I'm glad you toned down the AangxMeng stuff. Definitely not my favourite pairing but I can deal with it, lol. The TophxSokka pairing I like and it's good to see him slowly whittling down her barriers. After all, Toph is a very defensive woman and her interaction with Sokka holds a lot of promise. I hope you feel well soon and are able to write more of this wonderful story. Please add me to yoru mailing list if you have one for this story. Either way I'll keep my eye on this story for updates. ;)

^_^ Ah, pooooor Zuko. Katara isn't gonna make it easy for him. Their meeting will be interesting, I'm sure. :) Iroh'll probably hear it from his concubine too. :) Excellent chapter. I hope your hands are doing better. :)

AWESOME! I was hoping that Katara woud stand up for herself. Zuzu is so aggravating in his secrecy and romantic suppression.

Damn girl, you write so well! I am very impressed. And your whole character voice and background texture is perfect.

Bravo!
Chris

Yes I will thank TonCapitain also! Excellent! I love it!

Also helps dull the annoyance of having to wait for the season finale til Dec. Though I confess I believe I enjoy your story more!

Many thanks for a beautiful job...

look at you go! nice chapter, thanks for updating so fast!

EEE! :3 I love the nicknames Katara has given her guards. XD Poor fellows.
Oooh, Katara is gonna make Zuko's life very difficult when she meets him next (at least for a while). He sure has a lot of nerve, rejecting her then demanding her back ^_^
This is a really good chapter :D quite delightful.