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for The Price of Peace

by Looneyluna

person chris
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Thanks for updating! I can't wait till they get together. I love this story.... I love the way you write all the the characters... the voices are spot-on. The only thing that struck me is that there is no tension for Aang. Or that fall of that relationship was not completely explained. Seems like he might feel a bit jealous or protective, or just have a bit of residual tension.

Awesome job!!!! More!
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I agree with Moncapitan, Zuko did screw up and his apology should be nowhere near painless. I'm glad he stopped talking about duty and stuff and finally admitted he loves Katara and needs her for himself. It's ok to be selfish after all, even if he is the Fire Lord. I hope he can find some sort of balance, cause all it's been about for the last while is his position as Fire Lord. That's what he's been focusing on ever since he left her. He did tell her straight to her face that she was never crowned, that she wasn't his wife. That hurt her like hell not to mention humiliate her in front of the entire Souther Water Tribe and her Gran-gran! Not to mention the fact that she was already putting it all on the line for a man that MANY hate. *sighs* Zuko, you better get it right!
person Chel
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey great chapter can't wait for the next!
person Scarylady
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEE!!!! This is great! Toph tormenting Sokka...Zuko having to humble himself in the name of love (and self-preservation)...*sigh* :) Can't wait to see what happens next! :) :)
person Scarylady
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:D That dinner has incredible potential...for humor, for fluff, for violence...for a lot of things. Yeah...sometimes the simple solutions are the best ones :) Yay for Aang!
person cambryn
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad this story was recommended to me. It's probably the best Avatar fanfic I've ever read. You've done a wonderful job, and I look forward to future the future chapters! XD
person Chel
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey love your story, this is my first review to any story, but heh if it'll keep you updating more often. lol Anyway I love the story I've only started it about a few days ago, but i thought it was awesome and keeping up with it. Keep it up girl. Chel
person Spleef
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are so evil, leaving us a cliffie!
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yep, definitely got me more interested in their little reunion dinner, lol. Can't wait to see what happens! ^^ Let's hope Zuko puts some passion into it, cause he's gonna have to win her heart back.
person Anon
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can barey wait to see what happens at dinner, and I am curious what Zuko's plan is. This story is very entertaining and I hope you keep it going.

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