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for The Price of Peace

by Looneyluna

person Bee
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. I LOVE your story! It's perfect. I love all the relationships you intimately design. I love Meng and Ang, and I really can't wait until you take things to the next level for them. It would be interesting to see Ang as the courting lover. LOL.
I love the relationship between Toph and Sokka. They are a perfect example of the saying "there's a thin line between love and hate." hehehe I love their sqabbles and I love Toph's resistance to Sokka, it's hilarious. I love the dynamics between Katara and Zuko. I can't wait to see her have his child. It will be interesting to see Zuko as a father, I think he is going to be very overprotective and loving, just like his mother. Even Iroh and his cocubine's relationship is beautiful. Also, I love the plot of your story, I mean there are going to be so many heirs to the throne that it will be interesting to see who is the legimate heir.
I love your story and I can't wait to read more!!
person Chris
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!!! that was frigging amazing!!! Beautifully done and oh so hot.

Girl, after that, you can bloody take as long as you want. I love all your stuff, anyway. Just keep writing!!!

I loved the way you unraveled Zuko both psychologically and then... ahem... physically. Perfect.

*claps hands* That was an (out)standing O *wink*
person Scarylady
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*blushes* That was...heart pounding. I'm sure Zuko will find many happy ways of appologizing to his wife ;3 Yes, this is a happy place to leave this story for a week or two...Have a nice break!
person Scarylady
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It just occured to me; Toph is probab;y "evesdropping" to some extent...O_O WOnder if she'll ever want to eat off that table again o_0
person Spleef
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, this chapter rocked.
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 24:

Picturing that fight between Zuko and Katara was just fun. ^^ I am SO glad that Zuko finally told the truth and confessed his undying love for her. It was about time! Let's just hope he realizes that besides apologizing for a long time to come he needs to make sure he shows her just how much he loves her. ;) After all, actions speak far louder than words! ooo, the promise of make-up sex is good too! More intimate moments between the two is always good and it gives Zuko a chance to show her his love. =) I'll be looking for the next e-mail update. Keep it up!
person chris
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!! OMG! That was so perfect. You gave Katara the perfect spice and compassion. And Zuko the humility but pride.

Lemme just tell you ... right now my life sucks... but this story just totally spirited me away from it all. I was laughing outloud! Well done and many thanks for your brilliant and intelligent writing. I know it can be a thankless job sometimes (I wrote 2 Legolas fics a while back) but there are a lot of people reading your fics. Know that the lovely fantasy world you provide and the mental escape is valued by many people. You are sharing your passion and fantasy with others... how giving and cool!

All this is a fancy way of saying ... Many thanks!!! I love it!!!!

Aloha,
Chris
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that rocked!
person Scarylady
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!! You have no idea how happy this chapter made me :) Lovely, LOVELY work! *sighs with contentment* Ooooh, the next chapter sounds /very/ good! Update soon, please!
person RedWine
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter! please go on !!

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