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for The Price of Peace

by Looneyluna

person Anon
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was the smoothest Sokka ever. That was so cute, and smooth and sexy. Man, thats amazing. Oh Oh, I can't wait for the her answer!
person RedWine
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If you ever do that again I will hunt you down and gut you like a fish!.

This is AWESOME I love it MORE!!!!!!
person Spleef
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn. that was one hell of a chapter!
person Anon
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Seriously, I think this is one of best Avatar fanfics I've ever read. I love the entire story, and how all the characters seem to be so... in character and just so much more mature.
person Deana
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have only read the first chapter and so far this story is really interesting.
person Scarylady
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! I'm so glad you updated this!! I love this story! Oooooh, Azula is so wicked! Yeesh, after all the time Zuko and Katara have spent being...intimate I'm surprised they haven't managed a baby yet...oh well. Oooh! And Iroh has a daughter! Oh jeez, she's gonna be spoiled! :3
person Ceiling90
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So seriously, this story is amazing. It has political intrigue, wonderful plot, and the characters seem to have grown from their original roots. It's almost as if the show went on and grew up into something even more enjoyable. First off, I love the political intrigue, to me it makes perfect sense as to what would happen as an aftermath of a century of war, and after such a long period of fighting, it's hard to let go, and lots of of the smaller villain or possible enemies try to fill up the power vacuum...Seriously, this three way fight for the throne is wonderful, I have no idea who could win this, and Azula a mom? Wow. It's so well played out and so well written, I seriously want more... Two, the characters, even though they're older, still seem to be those that would still inhabit the show, barring that the premise of the story, has happened. All the characters still seem to be themselves and wonderfully grown up... but I especially love how Katara and Zuko are portrayed... Sure in the show it doesn't it's debateable as to who Katara likes or even ends up with... But these two are just so wonderful, they're almost comedic despite the agnst they both constantly go through... I really love how they're written by you, they seem so... right, not changing really from their current counterparts at all... I'd love to see how their children fare... This is a wonderful read, thanks.
schedule March 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interlude 24:

Passionate is an understatement for that chapter, lol. You did a really good job with their make-up scene, not to mention the numerous confessions were wonderful to read. It seems they are well on track to being together once again, in every sense of the word. I'm glad to hear you have lots more planned for them in the future cause there's still a lot of story to be told! ^^ Azula's still out there, after all. You definitely have the Zutara chemistry perfectly and I hope to see much more of it in the future. Take a well deserved break and I'll be sure to read your next chapter.
person poornmiserable
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hope no one in the house could hear their makeup session....they are gonna have to throw out that table...good work as always update soon
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good god, that was great make up sex!

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