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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. That left me all steamy, myself! That was a great shower scene, didn't know Jakey had it in him.
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A part of my heart broke for Trixie when jake called out Rose's name. ~sobs~ I just wanted you to know that.
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you finally got jake and trixie together. Your story is the only one on here that I read other than Avatar. Its really good, I hate how hard they've had it, but its a good story. Please keep it going.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow...
this is so great!
a few typo's here and there but besides that this is awesome!
I felt like I was there and in the middle of the problems!
keep up the great work!
this is so great!
a few typo's here and there but besides that this is awesome!
I felt like I was there and in the middle of the problems!
keep up the great work!
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And here I was thinking it was going to get hot and heavy on this site. I think it would have been safe to enter this chapter on ff.net. It was still awsome though. I love the way you're able to describe whats going on in a scene without them talking, especially Jake. Keep up the awsome job!
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Jake is realy kind to Trixie and I like Tixie.
Please continue
Please continue
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Welcome, my fellow ADJL writer! It's so hard to find quality fanfiction these days, but your work does not disappoint. :) I hope you'll think kindly of my own, if you ever have the occasion to read it. *bows* I have had only one review so far, and it was by someone who was apparently unfriendly toward one of the other writers; it's got me kind of bummed. Anyway, awesome story, truly awesome. Cheers!
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved chapter seven, wish things weren't getting so hard for Trixie and Jake. Damn! I love that Jakey, he's so considerate and caring.