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February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story and I hope that you continue it! I was never a fan of Dib/Dwicky (mainly cuz Dwicky reminds me of my own studet councelor...only..nevermind) but this story was fantastic and rapable. Please continue it. I shall stalk you
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good. Finally an IZ fic that's original and has neat characterisations. I like seeing the characters in more difficult and challenging situations. It's also dark and that's what I like. I especially look forward to the porn if it's written as well as the rest of the story. (I'm a pervert, what can I say!)
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July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I can't beleive how fucked up this is! Every time I try to make something, someone comes out with it before me! I was gonna make a story somewhat like this! lol, I'm really enjoying it though, since Dwicky is such a kick ass charictor! I can't wait for more! ^_^
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wonder why no one else has reviewed this...
You've created such a fantastic environment here, realistically dark and gritty, with a lot of attention to details. The opening was awesome. Your nasty, tough Dib is fun to read. In the harsh environment he's become a lot more like his sister. (What happened to her, anyway? She seems like she would thrive there.) The way Dwicky acts reminds me of... a less oblivious version of Pratchett's Twoflower character, or Rincewind, though I haven't read Discworld in a while. He's not really survivor material, is he? Why Dib suddenly kissed him is a bit hazy... or, maybe not. That love/hate stuff, I suppose. It'll get me to keep reading, anyway. Another thing I really liked was your twitchy, creepy, mohawked Keef. I was wracking my brain for red-haired characters, but I honestly didn't expect it to be him. HE certainly changed! Other than the quirks (the people twitch a lot, and Dwicky says "Ah" quite often) your characterization is very interesting. Keep it up, dude.
You've created such a fantastic environment here, realistically dark and gritty, with a lot of attention to details. The opening was awesome. Your nasty, tough Dib is fun to read. In the harsh environment he's become a lot more like his sister. (What happened to her, anyway? She seems like she would thrive there.) The way Dwicky acts reminds me of... a less oblivious version of Pratchett's Twoflower character, or Rincewind, though I haven't read Discworld in a while. He's not really survivor material, is he? Why Dib suddenly kissed him is a bit hazy... or, maybe not. That love/hate stuff, I suppose. It'll get me to keep reading, anyway. Another thing I really liked was your twitchy, creepy, mohawked Keef. I was wracking my brain for red-haired characters, but I honestly didn't expect it to be him. HE certainly changed! Other than the quirks (the people twitch a lot, and Dwicky says "Ah" quite often) your characterization is very interesting. Keep it up, dude.