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for A brief moment in time

by Fanatical

person Anon
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweet
person Anon
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!! I wanna know what happens next, please update soon!!
person Explosivefruit911
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!!!!Please update soon!
person lightbird
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated! Good chapter! I really like the extra, original scenes that you've created in this story. Did Mulan help Shan-Yu escape?
person Alisha
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it very much! Please finish it, I really want to see what happens!!
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job so far! I like the idea of them meeting before the scene in the Tung Shao Pass when he's about to slash at her. And I like the portrayal of Shan - you made him human, with a code of honor and his own side of the story instead of the one-dimensional, hawk-eyed villain from the Disney movie (I tried to do the same thing in my Shan-Yu story). Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more.

And thanks for reviewing my story also.
person Troys_Priestess
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
POST MORE PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE!


i cant wait for some hun action! ;)
person me
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
definetly interesting keep this up
person ShiokoRyusaki
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, I can't wait for the next chapter. Plz cont. the great work.
person Jenjen
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it Love It!!!! More Please!!!!

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