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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hope this doesnt lead to bad things for katara and the baby...
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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh... that poor baby.
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well worth the wait! When I first read about Zuko's relationship with Kuzon, I was surprised that he wasn't more sympathetic to Kuzon - after all, all Zuko wanted as a child was his father's affection. Maybe Kuzon's outburst will knock some sense into him.
I really enjoy the direction you're taking with this, especially with the Fire Nation people's reactions to Muimi - not everyone accepts her but not everyone hates her. Good balance.
I really enjoy the direction you're taking with this, especially with the Fire Nation people's reactions to Muimi - not everyone accepts her but not everyone hates her. Good balance.
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I feel so bad for Kuzon, I want to adopt him. It must have hurt Miumi to hear him scream and cry like that :(
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As I mentioned in my review of "Slow Heat", these stories feel very authentic. The language and pace of the story is generally very good and the level of detail is far superior to most fanfic.
I felt myself being disturbed repeatedly by Zuko's treatment of Katara/Miumi("Taste of me." comes to mind), but this is just a statement of personal belief rather than a knock against the story. His behavior is true to both Zuko's character (he's always been a little bipolar) and the cultural period on which Avatar is based. Doesn't mean I have to like it though.
I found the "Katara: reincarnated" concept very original and it was very interesting to read how it played out. The original characters are welcome additions and fit in well with the Avatar universe.
Is chapter 18 the end? I seem to remember you saying at some point that Aang and Toph will make appearances but they haven't yet. Hopefully, the story will continue long enough for them to do so.
Great job!
+++++/5
I felt myself being disturbed repeatedly by Zuko's treatment of Katara/Miumi("Taste of me." comes to mind), but this is just a statement of personal belief rather than a knock against the story. His behavior is true to both Zuko's character (he's always been a little bipolar) and the cultural period on which Avatar is based. Doesn't mean I have to like it though.
I found the "Katara: reincarnated" concept very original and it was very interesting to read how it played out. The original characters are welcome additions and fit in well with the Avatar universe.
Is chapter 18 the end? I seem to remember you saying at some point that Aang and Toph will make appearances but they haven't yet. Hopefully, the story will continue long enough for them to do so.
Great job!
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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!! Don't leave it there!! Great plot by the way. PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE!!!!!!!!
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March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I love all of your stories, and this is by far the best one yet, besides the other ones I have read of yours. I like the twist, and it's refreashing to see the battles of past and present conflict.
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my, I did not see that coming!
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was great I've really been looking forward to an update on this story. Write again soon, please!!Chel
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Id be pissed if I had a chain on my leg too.