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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting at first.
Not my style later(And also iligal)
And even more not my style towards the end.
Please fix it somehow because I realy want to see how it ends.
Not my style later(And also iligal)
And even more not my style towards the end.
Please fix it somehow because I realy want to see how it ends.
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was a little shallow, with little character development, and the author lost count of "Lilo's Orgasms,"...I counted 4. Plus, when did Lilo learn where the "erection" goes? I mean you were explaining it away, and I can understand masturbation, but not seduction. But, honestly the choreography was awesome. Keep up the good work.
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September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome! please hurry and update. Read all 3 chapters just now and got so fucking horny . Plz plz plz! Plz hurry and update. Thank you! On a scale of 1-10... 100!
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is Nani’s boyfriend David(?) going to be with Lilo, too?
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's a really awesome story, and you REALLY NEED to continue it!
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Soooo Hot!
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please Continue this WONDERFUL story!!
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice ;)
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July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update your story
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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!!
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K
KE
KEE
KEEP
KEEP W
KEEP WR
KEEP WRI
KEEP WRIT
KEEP WRITI
KEEP WRITIN
KEEP WRITING
KEEP WRITING P
KEEP WRITING PL
KEEP WRITING PLE
KEEP WRITING PLEA
KEEP WRITING PLEAS
KEEP WRITING PLEASE!!!!!!