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for Tomorrow

by LanShen

person Ravin J Rijhsinghani
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yo, after they have...sex....yes, make then do it, they love each other....make the final battle with ozai, yes, but make a battle with zuko too! before i mean. o, make it rite wen they r having sex, thatll make need 4 much cursing, insults and comments! that way, u kno, the alternate story line with zuko can have its....you know, thing. k, thts all.
person penpaninu
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
haha! I noticed you used the sex metaphor from Memoirs of a Geisha. Well done! Will you write any more chapters?
person me
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL first avatar lemon i've seen. i had to lol at cutting to Zuko though; it's about to get more awkward i imagine.
person darkness
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS AWESOME!! next chapter please!! ^-^
person a person
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was sooo awesome....keep up the good work!! ^-^ I've been waiting for a story when Sokka walks in on them two...lol
person etman93
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHH I HATE CLIFFYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Make new chapter soon this looks like a good story=)

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