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BUT BUT BUT BUT BUT!!!!

 

I HAVEN'T FINISHED THE SECOND PART!!!! PLEASE PLEASE! I LOVE YOUR WRITING, YOU ARE AN AMAZING AUTHOR AND THIS WAS A GREAT STORY! Please don't leave me wondering what's gonna happen! I need to know! Please post it back, at least for a couple of weeks, just so I can finish Hot Water and Volcano!

This was a really good story. Though I like the ending of the series, I also enjoy the ending in "Hot Water". I do wish, however, that in the end of this book you would have mentioned something about their children. Nevertheless, there is much in this story that would have been a very good addition to "Hot Water". You have alot of skill. I wish I had had that but I'm still far from your level.

I actually prefer this ending a lot better. The chase and hunt is all so sexy. :)

I think you did a wonderful job!
I have enjoyed everthing you have written and I think this is the best ending you have made.

I've always loved this trilogy, but I'm even more impressed with the revisions and additions. This newer version is definitely awesome. I can't wait until it's complete! :D

Yummy yummy yummy!

I'm glad I read it. It was hot and delicious and I'm glad you got inspired ^^ Nothing better than yummy Zutara smut on a icky icky day.

I like the water suits. Katara's climax oddly suited her. Seeing as you always have Zuko breath fire as he orgasms and Katara to make a big splash as she released oddly suited her.

Now, that's got me wondering...since waterbending is linked to one's emotions...did a waterbender's house mysterious cave in while he/she is having sex?

ba hahahaahhahahahahaahaaaa

when ever zuko roars out fire as he comes it just makes me laugh so loudly

i just love the way the whole crew of the ship would have been able to hear that entire episode...

eachpeach thinks that the soldiers trampling mud onto the bedding is a nice, symbolic touch.

man i love your zuko
i love that he is so petty that he orders the guards to "confiscate any personal belongings" despite it being obvious that neither aang or katara own very much.

i love that he just busts in to the inn and takes her not caring how desperate/cruel he looks

i guess being the fire lord means he can do what he wants and no one will judge him

i suppose that is obvious really still, the thought of the fire lord of an entire nation being so overbearingly harsh and cruel toward a 15 year old (even if he is the avatar he is still a gentle and the way you write him not very powerful being)

i'm not sure how i feel about the "i'll save you from the avatar" comment
yeah i get the whole symmetry thing and yes it does ad to the petty/self-righteous character of your zuzu... upon second thoughts i love that line.

once again... yay for this story

“I am doing nothing wrong to her, that point aside it is none of your business what I do, the Fire Nation does not recognize you as any kind of authority!”

and by firenation he means himself

i love this story so much but i am never going to get this reread done there seems to be something worthy of reviewing every few sentences