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Hmm. I'm not sure what to think since this is short right now. I want Zim to come back to Earth to be with Dib. I want him to get happiness, and to get back at those who traded him and took him. I want Dib to know. To help. To love him. To show him everything could be alright and help him with his intimacy. The idea of it as well. I just hate the fact Zim is broken. 

*Explodes in a fit of goodness that is this fic* It's odd really. Every time I'm about to read my last ZADR someone has to come along a write something so amazing that I, rather zombie like, must keep loving the idea. Can not wait for your next installment!

lol! u might not believe this but there was once i time i never took the time to review until i started writing stories of my own and i know wut itz like having ghost readers who never review and it suckz! so now i review everything i read thankfully i hate flamers so i don't flame! ^^ another great chapter!!! ^^ hehe dibz boyfriend is a nice guy but i'll never ever give up zim dib romance! thatz coming later right!?? and the lazer tag scene pure genius!! ^^ kudoz!

wow that was REAAAAALLLLYYYYYYY GOOD!! ^^ hehe!!

NOOOOO! Let's NOT go to bed! >< Damnit! Okay, now I'm just being a perv... >. > Anyhow, I feel all HORRIBLE for Zim now! Being all abused and crap... v.v By the way, I'm not sure if I just missed it or not, but what did the Irkens trade Zim for? o.O OOOoooh I hope it all turns out alright for Zim, Dib, Jake, and that one alien guy(can't remember his name, no offence)! I hope the Irkens get what's coming to them for trading Zim to those a-holes too!

Dude...I must admit, my attention had been nearlt lost by the second chapter, but now had TOTALLY been recaptured. I seriously can't wait until you figure out what you want to do with this fic.

Speaking of which, I would SERIOUSLY consider writing some sort of outline for your fic. I write a chapter by chapter outline, but you could go simpler and just make a basic outline to help you have an idea of understanding what you want to happen while you are writing. Sort of as a referal so you don't forget your story while you are writing. Just a suggestion! I find that stories with outlines are usually better than those without. And this fic most assuredly has potential to be one of the better fics!

Until next update!
-Krimzon

OK, I HAVE NO IDEA WERE THIS IS GOING. PLEase continue.

awwwwwwwwwwwww wut a cute chapter!!!

Awww! This is one of those awwwww, I wanna glomp Dib moments! Updateupdateupdate!

(By the way, nice chapter length--try for longer though ^.^ Pwease? & nice update speed)

wow that tas REALLY good i wonder wut happened to zim? hm..*goes 2 ponder* poor dibbles!!