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by lilvior

person NekoRai
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW I'd never really thought Depression could do that to a person.
If any thing I think Clay should rescue Jack. He has a very different out look on good and evil.
So he would realise that Jack wasn't evil just a lonley child looking for a friend and give him that one little thnig.
Then later their friendship could evolve into something deeper like love.
person kai
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
me wants chase to save him
person siren
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woohoo have chase save him
person chase's girl
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Have chase save him. Please!!!!!! I love Jack don't let him die.
person AketchiDragon
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* About time somebody did a good story with Jack. And by the way.................would you be such a kind author and write about CHASE saving the poor kid, but of course this is a democracy.
person me
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Totallt Think Rai should save him some how
person Hybrid
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me: Oh, so depressing. I like it so far. Chase! SAVE HIM!!
Chase: Why should I?
Me: 'CAUSE I SAID SO!!
Chase: You're in no control of this story, so... (sticks tounge out) Nyah.
Me: MAKE CHASE SAVE JACK!! Or Rai. Or let him die. I don't really mind.
Chase: LET HIM DIE!!
Me: Shut up!
person Anon
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really good, poor poor jack. i'd like him to be saved by raimundo.
person lydia
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jack. You are right...he never gets a break in the show. As for who to save him...my vote would be for Rai! Chase might be a cutie...but he is an arrogant basterd and only really had eyes for Omi. Clay is nice...but I can't really see him with Jack. Can't wait for the next part! Great work!
person bloodyrose
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CHASE! make it CHASE!!!!!!!!!! major OOC!

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