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June 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was really good more would be better. =^_^=
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December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...*sigh* well, it was hot... but it could have been a little longer and more detailed... maybe a bit slower too
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June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmm good needs another chapter but you need some penitration here
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS A GOOD STORY!!!!!!!!
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was very good but I recomend adding the first chapter to the second chapter to make it one long chapter. This is because first of all somebody who wants to know if this is a good story is going to scan through the first chapter if the chapter is boring they won't read. Also try to spell your chapter titles correctly.
This is just a suggestion,
The story rochked anyway !!!
JoxBox
This is just a suggestion,
The story rochked anyway !!!
JoxBox