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ok first from all you wrote Danny's mum's name wrong it's Madie but otherwise a good storie

Um...chapter 2 only says:

"Discalmer: I dont own Danny phatom I wish I did sadly.
Authors Note:
I'm very sorry that this chapter is very short but since people actually like the first chapter I plan on updating and going out with a bang. Thank you for all the help comments as well as the constuctive critizism. ( I know I spelled that wrong> "

I think something went wrong with the characters that you typed after wrong.

oh, that was pretty good. I liked the ending. :)

interesting...

*Bow* I thank you for responding. ^_^ It was well writen, and answered my challenge perfectly.

A few interesting ideas in this fic suffer from poor character development and grammar. Try spellcheck and flesh out your characters a little bit. You wouldn't be the same author of the other Vlad/Danny fic? It's interesting to note that in both stories the name Maddie is identically mispelled, namely "Mattie".