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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story... it makes me moist in my special places... lol sorry couldn't resist.
Great story keep it up! ^-^
Great story keep it up! ^-^
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kimiko is a bitch, Omi is cute, I like this story a lot. Yay.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello this is Mak again... I feel So bad for not writing a better review... so I waited untillt he next chapter and Im glad I did...
I LOVE IT!
It is amazing! Hope you update soon!
I LOVE IT!
It is amazing! Hope you update soon!
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! It's grate! Please update soon.
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is so good. I love it when Rai loves Jack and Jack loves Chase and Chase is a git. My fave line in this so far: 'He wanted to hug all the ‘evil’ out of him, make him forget all about Chase Young'. I loved that line so much, not sure why. Something about smooshing the evil out of someone amused me.
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very very good and very sweet
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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this, please continue! I only just discovered this category was here, I'd resigned myself to posting non-graphic stuff on fanfiction.net instead, but now I can write something lovely and depraved! As for the emo, whatever floats your boat love. I myself am proud to be wearing a 'My Chemical Romance' t-shirt this very moment.
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg.....this is THE best story I've read all day. I can't wait for it to continue. I actually cried through part of it. You're so good with you're writing. You put so much description and emotion in it. I can actually visualize the story unfolding. Keep up the good work. I look forward to the next chapter.