rate_review Reviews

awesome story I loved it!!!! :)

There are people that bitch when people randomly get laid. 0_o I look for shit like that. But whatever, It was obvious to me they were an established couple. It's in the first paragraph. God people are dumb.

Anyways, I have to say I like this one more then it's prequel. There's lube. Ha ha. ^_^ I noticed you like Wanton!Richie. I'm a sucker for Dominant!Richie but you write Wanton!Richie so well I have to approve of him. Hee hee. And your Virgil is so sweet. I like his dialogue the best. You write with fluff tones but thank god no sappiness. You rock!

Oh and I almost forgot. I liked your character description. I actually went "o0o0o...nice" when you used lily-white. It fit in the sentence perfectly and I rarely see it used. And you used chocolate skin *claps*. I love when people use chocolate skin. It just seems so sexy and beautiful.

I must say, this was very fun to read. Well done! ^_^

Well, I saw this story of ff.net and I thought you were good at VR slash. I personally love this story, wish I could write without blushing. Well, good luck getting your other stories on this site as well.

AH! *crumbles* This pairing always makes me melt into a puddle of fangirl ooze....I try to restrain it, but I NEVER succeded when it comes to my love of this pairing. ._. And it takes alot for me to admit that. I hate fangirlish tendencies....*sobs over her lost pride*

But anywho.....this was good. :D You should try writing other pairings....such as Hotstreak/Shiv....>>; *cough hint cough*