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by Florville

person BurningSilence
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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Oh gods...

KILL THE BASTARD OFF! Umm *blinks, clears throat* This chapter was amazing. Really, it was. Poor Purple! Why would Meero do that? Well, he answered that, but..WHY? *sniffle* I hope Red makes Purple feel better...and brings Meero a pain like never before!

But amazing chapter!
person vtsfy
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Actually, strangely enough I expected that... *blink* Wierd, huh?

*takes a dismembered spider leg and starts slamming it repeatedly against the computer desk* This isn't the roach's skull, but for now it'll do. *sadistic grin*
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_^ I love this chapter! Poor Purple though.. I hope Red does tear Meero apart! Heh.. that would be fun.
person Insanity
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading the story I swear and loving it! I feel so bad for Red. At first he comes off as this jealous jerk, but now I can't help but feel sympathy for him. Poor Purple didn't deserve what he got either, but at the same time even if the letter was a fake, this whole time Red has been telling him to be careful and Purple never seemed to care. What a mess the two are in now.

Really can't wait to read more. It's so nice to see more than one great story from you :)
person Meee
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I KNEW that Meero's kindness was all fake!!! I hope Red and Purple get along better now.. ^^;
person InvaderMonkey
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O THAT LITTLE ROACH!!!!! >< how do i usualy know these things??? something always bad happens with an oc in books and fanfiction IT CREEPS ME OUUUUT!!!! i hope red will kill meero in THE MOST PAINFUL WAY EVEEEEEER!!! poor pur :( great chapter even though i was a bout ready to break something at how mad i was at meero! lol!
person BurningSilence
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O Oh no...This is so sad! I feel so bad for both of them...They both feel betrayed in different ways. *sniffle* Very good chapter. I need to see what happens next!
person Tama-sama
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! *Cries* Poor Red! I feel all choaked up now! T_T I suppose the whole plan wasen't the best idea in the first place though... ARAGH! *Rips out hair* I need to know what's gonnan happen!!
person Kharn
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaah! Its all gone squeet-bong-kaboom! (yes.)
That chapter was awesome, and yes thanks for the super swift update. *does florville dance* Cant wait to see what happens next.
person InvaderMonkey
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! ^_^ don't wrry i don't get in a bad mood easily unless..ok well i do but not with fics they make me happy!!! ^_^ glad u updated! well i still feel bad or red but purple does have a point...*shakes head sadly* but hopefully things will turn out for the better...right? ^_^

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