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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is incredibly well written. You capture both sensations- mental and physical, very well. I look forward to seeing more
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good. An excellent start for the fic! Reading this chapter makes me hungry for more! So you'd better update REALLY soon or else :p (just kidding... but do it anyway :))