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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! i can't wait for more chapters!!! I wish i could think of more to write to critisize and crituge but i can't i liked to story nothing i'd add but another chapter.
(PS i suck at spelling)
(PS i suck at spelling)
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
are you going to write more chapters or is that it. i think that this story is pritty good
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story. Can't wait to seew what the centurions are gonna do to good ol Kimmy. Could make for a decent episode on Disney, except for the sex of course. Stupid censors.... Could go hand in hand with fighting Shego instead of the orgasms, but I believe we all know what works the best.
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice start. Neat touch starting by having Ron be Kim's "slave"... I look forward to reading more.
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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A nice start. Please update soon.
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I really liked that episode and wished they did something with it,....well I guess they did since Kims Battle Suit had some things in comon with the Centuion project. This is a very nice original story and it was a lot of fun to read. I give this an A+. Please do continue, I would like to know what happens next. :) Later
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story keep it up if you need a beta contact me thanks
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn man, this seems so intense. keep it up
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...Though I havent seen the episode referred in the fic, it was wonderfully written!!!! What do those nano machines have in store for Kim and Ron? I hate cliffies!!!!
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nicely done cant wait for another update. maybe you should make the nanites transferabble or something so other females can "catch" it, ya know cause you can never have to many mind control slaves