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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay...the concept works well. However I do not know if english is your first language. You may want to polish the grammar. But I am curious to see more.
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I';m not signed in right now but this is a very interesting story. im not sure if Firebenders would have blue eyes but thats not really important. i hope we see more of this man ^^