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Hmmmm, update soon? o.O I love this story, and would hate for it to die.

Great chapter, I love how it adds a whole element of mystery and a sub plot to the story as well. And it's great that you kept the identity of the caller a secret...it adds tension to the story and leaves the reader on the edge. It's a pleasure betaing for you. Great work, I'm really looking forward to more!

~Florville

AWWW!!!! I LOOOOOOVED this chapter! *LURVE* And yes, I got your email.

I just love the whole concept of rubies and sapphires, and it was a great title for the chapter. Excellent work, that was a really nice touch, which I liked quite a lot. You have a real skill for setting...very poetic, you seem to be a very image-driven person, which I love in a writer. The image of the golden sunlight coming through in bars was awesome. A lot of people don't realise that those are the things that stay with readers; images that the writer can conjure in the reader's head. When you make someone visualise something, you create the picture and the story in their head. I could go on and on about how much I love that aspect of your style, but I must move on.

Oh, and heck, I wanted to say, that was a good drawing you put the link up for. And I'm smacking myself now for being a total dumbshit; I never clued in to the fact that I could draw your character for you if you want. So if you want me to try my hand at doing a sketch of Moody, feel free to let me know. If you wanna see my other work, and if you haven't checked out my site yet, here's the link: http://florville.deviantart.com/

*LURVE* And keep writing!
~Florville

I just wanted to say that I've been reading this story since the beginning, and I must say that this is the first time I've actually liked a story that contains an original character. Most of the others can just be written off as Mary Sues, but I really like yours, because it actually has a plot to it. Sorry I haven't really reviewed before now; I wanted to make a suggestion, though. While this story is excellent, I think you need a beta to fix up the grammatical errors. I don't mean to offend you, I hope I'm not *hides*...but I was wondering, could I do the honours? I'd love to beta your story for you, because it's really, really well-done and I quite enjoy it. Feel free to get back to me, my email is sugarsteph14@hotmail.com

Again, I'm really loving this. *drools at Zim masturbation chappy*

~Florville

:O

No way! You get Florville as a beta! (I feel like I'm talking about her like an object... sorry Tallest Flor :( ) lucky! I have to make a fanfiction... I used to have ARCHIVES and ARCHIVES of Zim fics and other fics that I wrote... but they were all deleted... so yeah... anyways, good story so far, so yay! *lurve*

What's up with chapter 10? O_o

Wow! This must be the only recent thing on AFF.net that is Invader Zim and actually uses toys! I like this chapter a lot *devilish grin*

MORE SEX!! MORE SEX!! XD I like this story... glad you finally updated! ^_^

Hey! more chapters! Very nice, odd plot though. Were could this be going...? Hoping to see more!

I'm beginning to really like this story! Please continue, and if you could, make the chapters a little bit longer, please? Thanks, I really like this story so far ^_^