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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Also, can you plz try to make the chapters a liitle longer?
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i demand an update, befor i die of the suspense
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting chapter. I found it quite entertaining. I hope you continue writing this because its quite original, and enjoyable to read.
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Exelent my friend this was very good exspceily the scythe very good imageing there must have more
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, this is pretty good. could u try to incorperate my character in to it in the next chapter, please?
he's a halfa like Danny.
name-Jason
ghost name-Dusk
wears a trench coat with a hood and weilds dual plasma guns
good job at the story. post more soon!
he's a halfa like Danny.
name-Jason
ghost name-Dusk
wears a trench coat with a hood and weilds dual plasma guns
good job at the story. post more soon!
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good, I liked it alot! Right more soon!
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August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the stuff's ok, but the only real hangup I have is how short the chapters are. just food for thought