rate_review Reviews

Wow. I'm guessing he used his status as Professor Membrane's son to get access to most of this stuff? Or just used his own hacker skills? But then, why the skin-tight get up? Ah, now I have to play the waiting game again. And you DID promise the next chapter would be longer...Yay! ;D

I have the cutest picture in my mind of Dib trying to stay awake when you wrote that. Loved this chapter as well can't wait to read more :)

Oh yeah! You're right! Sorry, but I haven't seen my IZ DVD's in 4 years...Man this is getting exciting! Hey, Dib's still shirtless, right? Last time I checked the only thing they gave him back was his pants. And how inconspicuously can he go snooping around when he's bare-chested with a metal collar around his neck? Oo; I'm dying to know how he's gonna pull this off!

Oh I do so wish your chapters were longer, but I suppouse you wouldn't be able to get them out to us as quickly if that were the case. At any rate I do love the the story. I've always loved the thought of Dib just giving up on his race and helping Zim, but you turned it into a much greater thought. It's all so yummy :)

Hot. :O Not a fan of the blood and humiliation most of the time, but the last part was hot XD

You're just a chapter MACHINE, aren't you? LOL

Ah! What a refreshing change from the cliche "The Tallest break the -You're not a real invader-" deal. I wonder what 'little escapade' they were refering to? Oh, yes, this was a very short chapter, but that's fine! Your almost DAILY updates and quality writing more than make up for it! Update soonish!

Slashy goodness! Awesome! ;d Although it IS sad to see Dib reduced to this, it seems he doesn't mind too much. This alliance is off to a great start already! Pukies for breakfast...Poor Dib. ;-;

Another fantastic chapter. I love the conflict you've set up between both of them, it really resonates. They're both confused by what's going on and it gives the reader the sense that they both - in their own ways - want to continue to explore this. And one little thing: Zim making Dib suck on his finger to make sure the saliva wouldn't burn shows a ton of character development on Zim's part - he's nowhere near as impulsive and rational as he was in the past and I think that could definitely be trouble for Dib down the road.

Another great chapter.

Well well well now XD I had no idea you had added so many chapters. Gah! I'm so glad you fixed the tense problem. Now it's grade A. I shuddered during the third chapter, OMG. I hope eventually Zim becomes more generous toward Dibbeh T-T

As for the contest, you can find the club at http://z-a-d-r.deviantart.com . The multi-chapterness and one-sidedness in this have already disqualified you from the contest, though :O

I'm also glad GIR still has shades of his former behavior *heart* Gotta love the GIR!