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it REALLY bugs me how you made Zuko's room sound like a hotel suite since in the second episode i only saw his room to be four metal walls and some banners...uuh, i think there was a desk.... and a matress.... but hey whatever works.

Very good fic. I liked the Cold Fire. This is better. Zuko is a jerk for burning her. I really don't understand how a guy can claim that he loves a woman so much but then turn right around and abuse her. Anyways, I like your writing style. I wonder what Sokka and Aang's reactions are gonna be. That will be entertaining. This is a good fic, but one thing that was bugging me through out reading chapter 2 is that Katara sighs too much. It really gets rather bothersome. All in all, I'll continue reading this fic because it is interesting. Keep up the good work.
~Chibi

that was..............................awesome. I am just loving this story more and more. please update soon.

ha! very well written! I can't wait for more, so update soon and make it another long chapter again ^.^

that was sooooo good....wheres the next chapter* looks around* nooo you must update.
adding to my favorites. I like where this is going.hehehehe lol

Woah, such an awesome chapter! I love how they both hate each other but love each other at the same time! I can't wait till the next chapter!

Have i ever told you, that you are a very talented writter. well thank you for this chapter iv been waiting for it for awhile...well actally not that long..but still. Ne-ways that was a good chapter. About the 'challenge': I want you 2 write a lemon on Zuko/Katara/Jet or Haru because if you wrote a lemon based on them you would write one hell of a fucking fic worth reading. Plus i have never actally seen or read a fic(any fic from fanfiction.net) in this whole damn site having threesomes. You are very talented in writing and you are THE first Author i have ever asked to write a HOT lemon fic that i actally looked forward to reading. well i hope that tells you how bad im looking forward to reading your Soon-2-be-fic.
-kinko

absolutly fucking brilliant as always spleef.

Nice chapter again Spleef ^^ There were quite a few parts I found interesting, like the aloe plants being important to the fire nation and such. Keep up the good work for this very good story Spleef :)

update soon, goddamn you!