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Wow. Great chapter! I just can't wait until Katara says 'I love you' to Zuko. Please x10,000 update soon!
I'm just wondering, how many chapters will this story have? It is one of the best, no, THE BEST zutara story I have ever read.
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"We are no longer the Knights who say 'Ni!'. We are now the Knights who say 'Ekky ekky ekky ekky paKONG! zOO BOING! bzrowzmmm'."

Omg!Omg!OmG! That was amazing...i'm bubbling with excitement and wonder and i can barely type this omg this story was toooo good u have to hurry and write the other one. will shi-ryu and zuko ever be friends again or is katara gonna have the baby what about Iroh. killer ending. i need more. i feel like a junky i just need more of this story. please please give it to me. oh yea, and how dare shi-ryu say that zuko doesnt love katara isnt obvious couldnt he see that zuko was worried about katara. ugh let them be friends please and wat about sokka and Aang its only rite that they know katara and zuko r in love even if they wont aprove of it but i think Aang will understand and Sokka will learn to except it okay so just rite more before i die of lack of this story

DUDE! this is a kickass story! minus the spelling errors, this could pass for an actual professional story! you should seriously consider being an author for real! I cant wait to see the end of this! keep writing! you have a natural talent and a very impressive way with words! great detail and description. you apply a lot of very nice writing tools in your fic and I am indeed very strongly gravitating to your works! you really should utilize your talents in life. I am personally a big fan of writing and drawing. my main form of expression being comic cartoons. If you are interested I would love to talk to you more about this writing of yours it really has impressed me. feel free to email me or whatever, i would gladly reply.

~Wikka

okay i know i've already reviewed but i just had to add some more to my last review...my and cuzin and i made a name but we never wrote a story and u really inspired me to right one and where do we go to find the next chapters do we go to latest or to the author directory look under your name and see all the stories u wrote and go to the new one well ne ways good story write more

Hey great chapter i loved it such fire such passion such... good sex scenes i loved it keep it up and write me back you have my email address kay love and chicken

Wow, this is definitely worth the wait, I did not notice any typos, but that mya be because I was so involved in your story. I love this Spicy chapter, hope the next chapter comes soon, I want to know how Zuko and Kitar deal with the revelations as well as what the story is between Iroh and Kiana. Then, how will Katara deal with the Fire noblewomen, and will the healers confirm that she is indeed pregnant. Will Zuko learn about her birthday? So many cliffies.

O.O Oh. My. Goodness. This chapter was certainly, most definitly worth the wait. Wow, and again, wow. Talk about a tangle...oi, I can't wait to see how THIS works out... Question: Did Sylid (I think I misspelled that) ever examin Katara? Just wondering.

I'm so glad that you brought Shi-Ryuu back! And I like Dark Mist, and I think that she's sufficenlty un-mary-sue-ish. ^_^ Please bring Sokka and Aang back soon too! Yay for Honorable Zuko! *gives you cookies* and Yay for you for finishing another chapter! ^_^

(squeals) FINALLY! (Runs around the room and dances)

Hey great chapter! I was excited for this! I'm glad you finally updated! I so can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon. Later. K15