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for Hot Water

by Spleef

person La Dolce
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...that was tres bien.
person Lee
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg... chapter 30 was really good i was dying for it to get here and it was worth the wait cant wait til the next chapters get up and what about katara's pregnancy?
person kayko15
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I'm sorry if I used any of your names for my fics. If I did (I honestly can't remember) I didn't mean to. And for Katara's nickname? I prefer Kat, and I really don't use that that much. *Shrug* Anyway onto the review!
Zuko: Oh brother.
Me: Shut up Zuko.
Zuko: I like this story by the way.
Me: Me too. I especially loved this chapter. Katara's so sweet. Gotta love the girl.
Zuko: I do.
Me: *Shakes head* Anyway so when you get the chance to update, please do. Later. K15
person Anonymous
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, this chapter was pretty interesting. I'm glad that they're all starting to get along. I do hope that Shi will find the Dark Mist and get back together again. I'm also glad that Zuko understands of why Iroh was with Kiana. Anyway hope you update Volcano soon, keep up the good work and see you later!!!!
person SleepingDragon
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AH! I've been pimped! (dies)

Great chapter, the drama hot the spot! I also loved Kitar's nickname (boy-toy!) Thats what we call my friend Tessa's boyfriend...lol!
person Scarylady
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your chapters are always worth the wait! At first I found Shi-Riuu (I think I misspelled that, sorry) really creepy but now...he really, REALLY needs a hug. YAY for Katara and her mad peace-making skilz!!!! AMAZING chapter! When I saw you had updated I did a mental happy-dance ('cuz honestly, it's hard to do a silly dance with a computer in your lap). Now we are left with the burning question (pun kinda intended): WHAT DOES KATARA's BURN MARK SIGNIFY!!!!!!!! THE SUSPENSE IS DEADLY!!!!! YAY for the new chapter!
person Ami
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that I’m really enjoying your story. I really liked Katara’s conversation with ‘Death Dragon’ and the way she held herself, very nicely done. Oh and I gotta know what Katara’s mark means! I mean I’m sure I could hazard a good guess but still, confirmation is much anticipated. I also know I’m one of the many that don’t review like I should and I understand that fanfiction authors don’t get paid for this stuff so reader feedback is all you get, I will try to be better in the future.

Now, you may very well be the best Zutara author out there [and I’d have to agree with that assessment] but I’m still not sure as to why authors writing said ship or anything other Avatar story related should credit you to the nickname of Tara in reference to Katara. It’s a very easy nickname to pick out of said name, just like Kat, Katty, Kattie or hell even Katie. I mean it would be different if this was a nickname with a direct reference to something specific happening in your story but that doesn’t seem to be the case here. I also read Harry Potter and I cannot even begin to tell you how man times I’ve seen Hermione shortned to ‘Mione within the stories yet I don’t see any of these people crediting another fanfiction author for the nickname nor do I remember ever seeing J.K.Rowling refer to Hermione as such, so though I don’t believe it to be canon its not an original idea that one person can claim sole ownership on. Now, did you just happen to come out with the nickname first? More than likely, the Avatar fanfiction base is still relatively small in comparison to other fandoms but I still don’t see how every author that comes after you should credit you for such a thing. I’m not trying to start a confrontation or anything, I’m just stating my opinion on the topic – sorry if I offended on that front.

Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that I’m really enjoying the story and I hope to see another chapter in the near future.
person Miranda
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I just loved this story.Personally I think it was the best story I have read. Th Plotline perfect. I really think you have have been touched. I really wouldnt be surprised if you became a writer.Anyway, just a totally awesome story.Keep it up.

with all do respect,
Miranda
person A.J.
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!! That was a great chapter!! To think that Iroh and Kiana got together is just too much! And I just knew Shi would make another appearance. Great job, this last chapter was definitely worth the wait!!
person tab-sempai
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This starting to sound like a soap opera. Iroh gettin it on with zukos mama :0

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