schedule
January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS WAS SO LOOOONNNGGGG!!!!! But very good. Poor Shi-ryu (that is spelled right?) I feel so bad for him. He's not a double-crosser right?
schedule
January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, another yummy chapter of Hot Water. I just love how you wrote about Iroh, Kiana, and Kitar. It gives a little bit more insight into why you have written the characters the way they are. I hope to see more and hear more about Kitar. He is my favorite of your original characters. He has so much potential and you've built him to have so many dimesions. Kitar's development is something I will eagerly read about and watch. I also really want to find out more about his relationships with Zuko, Iroh, his parents and most especially his partner, The Dark Mist. I foresee another side story, that can join your other wonderful fic Volcano.
YOU ARE the best Zutara writer, and I think being the best can sometimes intimidate persons from leaving reviews because they think you expect a review that is a profound disertation and analysis of your chapter. TO ALL WHO READ THIS FIC, I think a simple "Great Chapter" is also also appreciated very much by the Spleefmistress, it really does not have to be something like what I've written, because appreciation and thanks even if it is simple or short is always Great for a writer. So to show my appreciation of your talented skills, I'd like to add Thank you for this wonderful fic and for introducing me to Zutara. Keep up the wonderful storytelling. :D
YOU ARE the best Zutara writer, and I think being the best can sometimes intimidate persons from leaving reviews because they think you expect a review that is a profound disertation and analysis of your chapter. TO ALL WHO READ THIS FIC, I think a simple "Great Chapter" is also also appreciated very much by the Spleefmistress, it really does not have to be something like what I've written, because appreciation and thanks even if it is simple or short is always Great for a writer. So to show my appreciation of your talented skills, I'd like to add Thank you for this wonderful fic and for introducing me to Zutara. Keep up the wonderful storytelling. :D
schedule
January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
finally, FINALLY u update after like wat, a long time? good chapter though it took forever
schedule
January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i read al the lemony goodness, this wuz a good scene, i've been wondering about the Dragon person, Y DO THEY HAVE TO BE SO (censored) IGNORANT?
schedule
January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh!CLIFFHANGER! amazing and completely original! very interesting, too
schedule
January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really INTENSE!
story's a little long, tho. but u are an AWESOME writer!
story's a little long, tho. but u are an AWESOME writer!
schedule
January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awsome chapter! please update soon!
schedule
January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-sigh- that was so beautiful... you're one of the few authors who make fanfiction worth reading. And the return of the assasin! YAY I like his character. It's really well developed...or maybe it's just me XD
schedule
January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Short but,
SUPER COOL! SUPER AWSOME!
I love when Katara stars having feelings for him!
SUPER COOL! SUPER AWSOME!
I love when Katara stars having feelings for him!
schedule
January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If I may ask, angry Spleef, what was the rumur that came to life? Please, do not quit writing, or be so angry, you are so wonderful. An awesome writer and a terriffic artist. I would like to get to know you. Please e-mail me? It is of your choice, of course.
'Rose
'Rose