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for Hot Water

by Spleef

person Anon
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yeah, and has Katara seen the palace doctor yet about those pregnancy tests? Clearly, that could also be a contributing factor to this cliff.! Again, Laters!
person La Dolce
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work as always, Spleef
person greenfireangel
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cat fight! The Katara/Iyashii scene was great. I think this is my favorite chapter.
person Anon
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, I'm glad you're back. This chapter was worth waiting for. I like how you got Katara to tell that idiot girl off and humiliate her in front of people. However I was a little disturbed when you had Shi try to give advice to Iroh on how to woo her. It was funny, but a little disturbing. Anyway I'm glad you're back update real soon, good luck with Volcano & the sequels and see you later!
person Crystalis
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice kat fight! But I do wonder if Katara would actually become friends w/Iyashii. humm...well, I'll just wait & see.
person Vicki So
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Finally get to see Katara kick some biyatch butt. I'd loved to see her drown the whelp... but this is much better. 8 )
person Poppydoodle
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved the scene by the pond, only wish it was quite a bit deeper! I liked how Katara handled herself and how she may be gaining the acceptance of the other women--a girl does need a few friends. Iroh's little romance was a suprize too, hope he takes his nephew's advice. Update soon.
person 4EverSleepingDragon
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GO KATARA! (Waves banner)
person Zukoscute2
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOO! UNCLE AND NEPHEW MADE UP! me happy! hehe, can i take a turn teaching the ring leader a lesson?
Inner Devil: ^-^
ME: *holds up an AK-47 and holds up the keys to a B-52 bomber plane*
person wilderness-writer
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was great! I loved reading Shi give advice to Iroh! Talk about the tables being turned! Awesome fight scene between Katara and that spoiled brat. I love how you kept Katara in character: her fiery spirit and her self-control were balanced well! Can't wait for the next update

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