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Lol! That was awesome! Wow... now I really really really wish I had a handy firebender around the house for those times of the month. Great idea!

As usual, this chapter was written beautifully, with a nice amount of intimacy and introspetion into the character's thoughts. Looking forward to the next chapter...

Great chapter. Could you please tell me what an OTP is? Everyone I ask has never heard of it-

wow. that was intense. i really liked it

wow all i can say is wow i mean this is a very well wriyyen story and just reading it paints a picture in ones mind of how the story actuall looks from a charecters perspective. all i can say is that u should keep up the good work and as a compliment to your writing talent i must say i spetn many hours reading your story chapter by chapter iver the past three days and i wil be looking forward to more chapters if there will be any and that i thought the fake pregnancy was brilliant and was wondering about that since the first tiome it was mentioned int the story.

thank you for a very compelling story and keep up the good work

Yeah, I guess the lengthy malnutrition threw off her "schedule", huh? Oh, well. It'll be interesting to see where this progresses. I await the next chap. Laters.

Hi there, it's me again. It's great to see another chapter here. I was impressed of how Zuko handles things in court and make fair decisions for everyone. I do hope that Katara will be okay after she tried that risky trick. Anyway keep up the good work, and see you later!

GAH! Clifhanger! NO! Hm...Zuko'd have a heart attack if he walked in and saw her all unconcious. And Katara...OUCH. I hope she fell on a rug and not the bare marble, 'cuz fainting sucks enough with out bruising her knees or hitting her head. >winces< I practically jumped out of my seat in excitement when I saw that you'd updated, SQUE! Good chapter...but now I'm gonna be fretting about what happened to Katara...:D

dang it. little cliffies are almost as bad as big cliffies.

Superb story and if you want to make a sequel nobody has the right to stop you

*gasp* What happened to Katara?? Awesome story! I loved the trials showing Zuko's wisdom. Really really cool!

*Meep!* I just discovered your work on Deviant Art! It's so cool! Especially... ahem... that one of Zuko... blush. That gave an orga- I mean... it made me very happy ;)

Great job, again! I can't wait until you update!