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May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this is very well done, disturbing a bit, but it was written to be that way. There deffinatly needs to be a chapter two :D His reach spreading beyond the little firebender to a certain airbender. I think since you portrayed Zuko so well, you would do Aang well too. Great story, great job.
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I mean...damn.... That was really well written, tastfull, if that's the right word. I really think you should continue this story. I'd love to see Ang and Zuko get together and then Ang go into the Avatar state when Zuko tells him this story. Anyway, this was awsome. Chapter two please!
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Zhao deserves to rot in hell! (throws Zhao plushie into furnace)
MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! TAKE THAT CHILD MOLISTER!
MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! TAKE THAT CHILD MOLISTER!
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad for Zuko. But this was very well written, kudos to u!
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*shudder* My poor Zuko muffin-baby * is totally hating Zhao*
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN YOU ZHAO!! DAMN YOU TO ALL 13 HELLS, BACK TO EARTH AND DOWN AGAIN!! BUURRRRRNN IIINNN HHEEEEELLLLL!!!!!
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great! poor Zuko! are you going to do anymore? you did seem to set something up there at the end. great job, bye!
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AH SWEET!
This is the best!
Will you be continueing this storyline?
This is the best!
Will you be continueing this storyline?
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DON'T TELL ME YOU'RE GOING TO WRITE A SEQUEL AND MAKE ZHAO DO THE SAME WITH AANG! GROSS! but that is a good thoery.
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sort of disturbing, sort of weird, but good theory.