schedule
May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. Though you do what I do in a fanfic and leave too many typoes. We both need to get ourselves some good editors. hehehehe But This is a pretty interesting story.
schedule
May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story has promise but PLEASE get the spelling and grammar fixed. It makes it hard to follow the story with it all messed up.