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oh my god this story is damn hot! ^/////^ please write another chapter for it! <3

I gotta say. i really liked this. it was well written and different. i've never seen anything with this couple before and i like the way you delt with larry being a robot. the ending was a bit creul though. grin. i'd love to see a continue of this and its had close to 150 readers so hopefully is one soon. if there is i'd appreciate an email or message to let me know . thanks

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saint

Uh...wow. I mean, wow. That was really...HOT.

This is really well done, and I'm so glad to find someone else's work for this pairing!

I really hope you continue, since I really enjoyed this.

Ahaha, I love this couple, and this fic. You should definatley write more.

Oh wow I was pretty sure I was gonna cry in disturbed fear after reading TimeSquad slash but damn was this ever good please continue this it's really well written I can practically hear their voices everytime they speak, keep up the good work.

Very very nice. And very realistic too. I really like how you wrote how the sex would work. A+ Work.