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August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was okay... I guess
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June 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i liked this story you should continue it. it is not very common to find unusual lemons like this one.
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was good. You should've made them older cos in the show(just so you know) they're only 8 years old. (hard 2 believe,isn't it?) But anyway,if you had made them older and they just thought back to the pants incident, it would've been better. But I liked it! The part about Hugh shhowing up was freaky though. What was that all about?
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey why dont you make a sheen and a libie one?^_^
try to update on my idea soon
well love always(i always say that)
me
try to update on my idea soon
well love always(i always say that)
me
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I know that its not that good. I had written this story before but it was deleted. So I tried to retype it from memory, but it didn't turn out the same. Sorry.
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January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm kinda on the iffy side opn 11 year olds doing it, but since it's a Fan Fic, i'll ignore that. I thought it was well written. Even if the actual "love" scene was too short.
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December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its good i like it, but i personaly think the love scene between jimmy and cindy was far too short.
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December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. I like the way you started the story at the end of another tale.