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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that is one interesting pair! Very well written and very steamy. Poor Jeremie though.
VoodooDoll
VoodooDoll
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this chapter was great too, but when are you going to get some actual 'penetration' going? I don't see this version of Xana not wanting that.
VoodooDoll
VoodooDoll
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December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! Another wonderful story by you! I don't think I saw any errors in any of your stories that I read. Great work and write more soon! I wish there were more Code Lyoko fics like this, or more in general for that matter.
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December 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great work, please update soon. I find the whole part about him seeming to 'obay' in the first chapter then go back to fighting in the second a bit strange but it's still a great story.
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December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic! I lovei t! Write more!
Animae
Animae
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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very well written.
write more!
5 out of 5!
write more!
5 out of 5!
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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jeremie!
This was a great chapter!
This isn't done is it?
I want to read more!
Write more!
Update quick!
This was a great chapter!
This isn't done is it?
I want to read more!
Write more!
Update quick!
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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was almost cute at the end, in a wierd twisted kinda way. Poor Jeremie. But this was a really good chapter. I loved it! =) So you better write more!
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December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, you are continuing it right? You beter becose i'll be mad if you dont. update soon, i want to read more of this realy good story.
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, I really enjoyed your chapter..you must write more...if you dont I will be sad....you should feel real good about yourself for writing such wonderful and realistic story...keep going...maggie