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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Idea is pretty good and the writing is ok. Besides just in general you could've added dash's size which would've helped a bit.
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I rather like Disturbed individuals. Nicely written, I'd love to read a second chapter!
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was a really nice story. I liked it heaps, and you thought it out well. ;) don't worry, everyone likes incest, they just don't like to admit it. especially when it comes to siblings
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG i loved it!!it was so sweet and cute that was a great story and your not a sick individual mwuahaha i like incest too(between m/f siblings)..for some reason lol..love your story thanks!
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dash was scary protective, but in a cute way. (Wait did I just call beating, almost raping, and threatning cute? Oh well, whatever) Nice to see some new stuff in this section too. Great job!