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There's a huge stupid grin plastered all over my face...and I don't care. That was awesome!

More detail! Make your chapters a little longer, or just go off the deepend with them! One shots are fun, but sometimes a little bit more detail is a better idea. I love it to death. I'm totally into the submissive/virgin idea of Victor, and his pathetic attempts to dominate in situations. I proudly support your work <3

That was i good i sowre i would never read a nec fic but i just coul;d not help myself and another thing you must update or you will call down the wrath of my Samurai flesh eating pandas.
With love; Imasuky Lomae

That was...wow. Brave of you to write this sort of thing, and so well written a piece it is too. I dont know if EmilyXVictor is really nec, I mean, she is dead, but she's not really DEAD dead. You know what I mean. Anyway. Despite her being dead as she is, I'm a haardcore VictorXEmily fan, and this was, without a doubt, one of my very favorite Corpse Bride fics, if my my favorite. Please continue this, or at least write another story!

nice, another Corpse Bride fic!
Gotta say...although this sounds like it should stay as a one-shot...your actually on top something here
My advice...Go fot it, feels like not enough people do that here...
Great job so far

Not only was the first chapter cute and the second chapter shmexy, but you (You wonderful person you) finally got the huevos to write a sex scene. Other comments of mine include, Mmmmmm dead lovin

This was good! The first chapter was a bit awkward, but the second was lovely.
You may have given me the courage to do my Emily/Bonejangles fic.