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for Jasmine and Rajah

by ChrisJackson

person LittleKitty
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Are Rajah and Jasmine able to communicate through the mind or somthing? And Jasmine was a virgin, what happened to the pain? Where was her father? And um.....Jasmine is kinda young, where did she learn about sex? How did Rajah turn into a male tiger? It's a she. And how did Rajah malemale or not ) know 'human' It'd been funnier if Jasmine roared at her or something......Kinda sick though. But, I knew what I was getting into when I first read the summery. So, my fault, really......Pretty good job. Except the whole pussy lips and jasmine screaming fuck, and a female turning into a male......The writing was a little childish...how old are you???
person angel
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! what can i say? An odd match but nonetheless hot! good job
person Random Reviewing Person
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Umm... first time I've seen this sort of thing...... well, it's okay, I guess, if you like that sort of thing.
But I'd like to point out is that the tiger screws like a human being, and has almost human emotions, but is still an animal. Is that, well, *scientifically correct*? If it isn't, never mind, this is fanfiction after all.
This is a good story if you like the genre. Do what you want.
person GiaWolff
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a bit short and not very detailed. If she was a virgin, having a 13 inch tiger cock shoved in you, and you would feel a little discomfort. Just a constructive thought.
person molly
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
beyond gross!
person TheodenKing
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fascinating. I think people should lay off you. If they'd read the summary they'd knew what he story is about and not read it. Your a good writer and should keep doing it.
person Angie
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok I have to admit as interesting as that was..it was a pretty good story! I know this makes me sound perverse but hell I know a good fic when I read one!
person Ayami
schedule September 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is an awsome story!
person DaN87
schedule August 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
your a sick fuck you know that? your fucking sick. dont ever write gross shit like this again. keep your messed fantasiest to yourself man i dont want to read them! fucking sicko
person Bob Hart
schedule August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, you are right, some of us do like that.

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