rate_review Reviews

Your spelling has gotten much better! Very nice to see an author take concrit as it is intended.

I looooovvvvveeeee this chapter! You've really been going crazy with this idea. It's fresh - It's new! I've never seen anyone else think/write of it.

Now, why not add some live demonstrations? hmmmmmmmmm? *wink, wink, smirk smirk* Late night infomercials are full of them - aren't they?

Check your spelling - but other than that...

HeHeHeHeHeHEHE... gasp... HaHaHaHaHaHa!!!!!!!!!