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October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, this story is so good! After every new chapter i just can't wait to see more! It's so heartbreaking that OP and Star can't be together awwww ;_____; Please update soon! :]
Awwww i really hope that you'll make a happy ending for this story...please! *__*
Awwww i really hope that you'll make a happy ending for this story...please! *__*
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October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely AWESOME! I love it, I can't wait to read what happens next. Poor Starscream.
Oh, by the way, You are amazing!
Oh, by the way, You are amazing!
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October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An update!!! Wow, Prime just barely made it out, nice twist wiht the other seekers. Hopefully they can save Screamer...after lots more action & angst though!
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October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my fuc*ing god, Thundercracker yes!!! I sooo luv you rigt now TC! :D You were an asshole Megs so you don't deserve to molest Prime :P Baby i was SO waiting for this chapter, it was very exciting and i definitely need more!:D Update soon please :3
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October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ad its thundercracker and skywarp to the resue yes! oh brilliant, oh i cant wait till the next chapter keep them coming!
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October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! OMG!! You are AWESOME!! I was about to give up hope on this story!! Then THIS!! I adore you!! I don't believe we are TOTALLY out of the woods, though! But, it seems this may not be all gloom and doom! I am AVIDLY awaiting the next chapter now! I thought the worst was SURE to happen, especially around the middle of THIS chappie! Thank you!! Thank you!! Thank you AGAIN!
Technically speaking, this is a very well written chapter. Your spelling was great and as was your punctuation and your grammar is excellent. You really have a feel for your characters, too. You have their personalities down to a science. Keep up the great work and update soon!! I am waiting with baited breath!! Bye for now!!
Transform and Roll Out!!
Cross_fire1205@yahoo.com aka
Jaime
Technically speaking, this is a very well written chapter. Your spelling was great and as was your punctuation and your grammar is excellent. You really have a feel for your characters, too. You have their personalities down to a science. Keep up the great work and update soon!! I am waiting with baited breath!! Bye for now!!
Transform and Roll Out!!
Cross_fire1205@yahoo.com aka
Jaime
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October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU! I was screaming at Megs the whole time i was reading the first part XD! YAY for wing mates *hearts* And thank you thank you thank you sooo much for the chapter! ^_^ i cant wait to see what happens! you have me craving moooooore ^^ and again, THANK YOU!
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September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the chapter! I beg you, please no MxP T.T i no want Megs to get his claws on Prime, i know he would do horrible things and make Starscream suffer and watch. I would rather see Prime captured, ends up with Starscream in need of medical care/repairs then kill Megs XD I know i am horrible and random.
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Waaaah poor Starscream! ;___; Megatron you asshole, you were a really bad 'con so i vote for no Prime touching for you!!! >.< Heh OP will be so pissed if Megs decide to tell him what he did to Star D: I hope Optimus will kick his ass! More! :3
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September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmm i think you should lety megs get prime althouggh realistically i dont want that to happend story wise it makes sense